My original vision of her was very much like a cat, playful but cruel. She's not like Discord, who has a hard time being anything but silly all the time. If this story hadn't already been published, if this was the first draft or something, I'd no doubt have looked into doing something like that, at least with some of the major events.Įden was always supposed to be fairly casual and informal, except when she's being serious or antagonistic. Steal away You're right, a story with chapters like that sounds like it could be very interesting. It's a very dark, serious story and I feel even a little splash of light would be a welcome contrast. Rainbow barely knows this guy.Ĭ9: A welcome relaxation but I still feel the tension hasn't really been defused in the way I was hoping. Uh, love is getting thrown around an awful lot for what seemed to be basically a rebound bang. Oh man, I was really looking forwards to hearing Eden's full side of the story as that dark mirror reflection to Luna's tale but it got cut super short. ![]() At times she's formal and mysterious and cryptic and at other's she's weirdly informal and casual. What? How can you guess that she's cursing by Tartarus if you're not reading her mind AND don't know what Tartarus is? ![]() “But your face speaks for you, little pony.” “Hrm, not at all.” His face split in a grim smile as he lifted a heavy claw and tapped beneath his eye. “I know not of Tartarus, little pony, but if you, hrm, will, you may call me Kin.”
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